What do you say of a short poem?

It's always a good rule of thumb to mirror rhymes, for instance, your first verse is an ABAB poem. But your second is a ABCA poem. They are not a like at all. Also, the first line in the first verse has 6 syllables, the first line in the second verse has 5. See what I'm saying? Personally I like this poem though. It's not my kind of poem, but I like it still. =]